When the shepherds were minding there sheep, suddenly in the distance lost of Angels appeared. the shepherds pourt there hands over there eyes because the angels light was so so bright. They could hardly see so they went to Bethlehem to see baby Jesus. he was asleep. "Don't wake him up," said Mary qwietley. "OK," said the shepherds. "He is so cuat (cute)" said the shepherds. The lambs said bah Baby Jesus woke up.
The above snippet was taken from the story of the Nativity which my class are currently serialising and was written by J. aged 6.